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The only thing that I could suggest from a designer/artist's perspective is the font. It's hard to read the text in the speech bubbles. I read through all of the pages and sometimes the letters in words are too close together. It's a little too italic and thin. I don't know if you hand drew it in or if you added it in after scanning your work (I hope it's the latter). I know it's hard to pick a font especially for graphic novels. I've never been a fan of Comic Sans so I'm always trying different ones out. Something to consider
I hope this helps you.
Keep up the splendid work
No, seriously. Wtf man. Y U SO GOOODDD?